Thursday, May 23, 2019
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I am a student at Gisborne Intermediate. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
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Kia ora Jarrod,
ReplyDeletethis writing that you have shared is descriptive and gives a view that opens up another perspective on this historic landing. You should have the job of taking students around the Heritage Trail and telling the stories!
I like the way your words are prominent on the slides. You have been discerning with the images you used and they add to your writing rather than being a distraction.
I wonder what other stories we will hear about Captain Cook's landing from your class?
Mā te wā
Mrs Torrie